Kimi (Approval Requred)

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Kimi (Approval Requred)

Post  Auramune on Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:27 pm

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Name: "The Experiment," Kimi
Age: 16
Eye Color: light purple cats-eyes
Hair Color: Dark purple
Special trail: Long black cat tail
Race: Transmuted Tuathan Human
Bio: Orphaned at an early age, "Kimi" was forced in to slavery, and then sold to the highest bidder. A group of corrupt alchemists who would raise her, and experiment on her throughout her life. For the most part, they were small experiments. Temporary changes in appearance, and testing out new methods of alchemy on her. Deciding that they wanted to try a different sort of experiment, the alchemists placed the girl in the center of the ovens of shadow Tail, and combined various ingredients. Unknown to the corrupt alchemists, Emy had previously used those ovens and wounded herself, spilling a large amount of blood inside. The combination of blood and the ingredients transformed the girl in to a doppleganger, in name alone, of Emy. She gave herself the name "Kimi"(Kat Emy) and ran away from the alchemists that kept her captive.
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I wasn't exactly sure if I should put the request here, or the adv. transmutation area, and decided on here and requesting approval. The items that were used in creating her would be synthesizing a cat, arat crystal, and magic crystal and the accidental emy blood. She is a tuathan, and this gives her no advantage other than a background, and a cat tail(and of course access to Emy's memories prior to this event.) The alchemists were NPCs, and I have no intention on using them for the same kind of character again(which is why I didn't request it in adv.alchemy, since none of them were an actual playable character.)


I think that about covers it.

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(Instead of deleting the old stuff, I'm just going to add the updated information below, and put the other in a spoiler.)

[Item Name] Transmuted Human/Demi-Human (Not exactly a homunculus.)

[OOC Skills] Transmutation, Synthesis, Fragmentation

[Scale of Transmutation] Large

[Average Success Rate] 43%(I think this is right?)

[Explanation of IC Process] A circle of ovens, each manned by one alchemist, are loaded with the proper items needed and then activated to infuse the dna of feline and human.

[Limits] Mortality, Schizophrenia and various mental afflictions. A slight lisp, and often times confused and blanks out since her memory is effected by 3 places. She may have characteristics and personality traits of a cat.

[Extra notes] Mariella was among the alchemists that experimented on the girl and feline(and where the % came from to meet the requirements.)


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Re: Kimi (Approval Requred)

Post  Mari Eir on Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:07 am

Adv Trans. xD
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Post  Auramune on Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:25 am

Moved to the right section. =D
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Post  Mari Eir on Thu Jul 14, 2011 1:35 pm

Well.. The actual transmutation has to be performed by PCs. That's to prevent just anyone from making something grand or ridiculous.
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Post  Auramune on Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:26 pm

Well, I don't have any pcs who can or would do this xD.

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It's mostly for a plot, and more than likely she will end up dead by the end of it. As you can see, she gains no powers, no anything other than what I've said, so it's not a grand or ridiculous thing. She can be killed like any other tuathan, and has emy's stats and skills. Which means she's grossly underpowered. The only reason she's not just a normal character without all of this, is because she needs access to emy's memories. I guess I'm asking for a sub-fec for a plot. Including how she was made.
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Post  Mari Eir on Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:53 pm

I wasn't saying you were doing that. xD It just seems.. Off? Maybe you can get something worked out, I'd really prefer to leave it as PCs only because that opens up an entirely different can of worms.
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Post  Auramune on Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:24 pm

Oh, I meant that my pcs don't have enough knowledge in alchemy to pull something like this off(and the one who might wouldn't do it because it's immoral, or something xD)

*NOTE* Will update this asap.
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Post  Auramune on Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:37 pm

Double post, but updated. =D?
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Post  Mari Eir on Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:22 pm

So the effects of the Transmutation only caused mental problems (I wouldn't call feline traits, something physical, a flaw)?
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Post  Auramune on Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:32 pm

Well, it's a flaw if you are a mouse or a ball of yarn.

But basically, yes. She functions properly other than mental issues.
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Post  Mari Eir on Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:47 pm

So she's not prone to any sort of sickness? Her actual body was broken down and reconfigured to be spliced with another living creature. o___o
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Re: Kimi (Approval Requred)

Post  Auramune on Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:55 pm

Not any more than a normal human would be(given that sickness in Erinn is very rare. Had it been outside of Erinn, it would be different.)
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Post  Mari Eir on Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:34 pm

Well, for instance.. due to the high concentration of Erg necessary to perform a large scale transmutation (anything involving a living creature.. that actually LIVES), Mari's daughter has a dependency upon Erg and is prone to the Erinn equivalent of "clone sickness". Basically it's because they're imperfect beings.
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Re: Kimi (Approval Requred)

Post  Auramune on Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:17 am

How about...


Aging more rapidly than normal humans. This will kill her off much quicker, if she's not killed off by another person before then. Making her life-span extremely short normally. Basically insuring that she does die.
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Post  Mithos on Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:54 am

Problem would be that there's no confirmation of death "of old age" in Erinn. The Tuathans are supposed to have an eternal life (if they aren't killed off by anything else). So that would only make her look old and wrinkly faster? xD

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Post  Auramune on Fri Jul 15, 2011 1:10 am

There's also very few cases of recorded sickness too.

Anyways, I'ma just bluebin this. If I decide to rework the idea later on I will. If not, then is not a big deal. ^^
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