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Post  Zwei Freeheart on Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:36 pm

Ok never got a chance to do this or just got plan lazy well lets talk about it.

Ok simple clean not to much XD note it does not count DK

ok

Soul healing
Meaning is ones soul is gone or is become a ghost or even been spilt. Zwei can Bring it back like the old age monks and stuff said they could do in china and Japan history.

Null Darkness
if darkness is use like some of the people in the guild use the darkness like summoning demons is Null. Zwei canít Null Darkness cast on ones self like DK does not count in this matter.

Null Curse
A two time thing can only used in a two week time. Zwei can lift a curse but if he tried lifting a powerful curse it drains Zwei of his enegry for a little while so its Recoil thing meaning he cant use his powers for a while.

Null if nobody knows what it means it means to negate or stop from working

ok for Gatemo

Zwei powers come from the pass people in his world. When coming to this world these powers altered from what they should of been.


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Re: Zwei hand markings

Post  Honeko on Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:46 pm

I guess my question about this is how does one cast darkness in the first place?

and fix soul problems? I think this needs a lot more explanation as I'm not totally certain what the point for these things is.
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Post  Zwei Freeheart on Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:52 pm

ya hon sorry ok anyway fix

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Re: Zwei hand markings

Post  Temo on Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:04 pm

Alright and now for the scary questions:

-How can Zwei do this stuff?
-Where did he learn it?
-Need to be more specific. I'm guessing the "power" is based off other players, but it'd be helpful to have an idea of what is too much.
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Post  Temo on Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:14 pm

And as far as that goes Zwei, I need to ask this - if these markings were something on his body before he came to Erinn, you need to think of something else. Stated this before, but the body does not come with the soul to the soul stream, therefore any bodily markings or scars would be gone as well.

Otherwise, I'm just plain old skeptical about it and would need to see this in action in order to fully comprehend and give my approval or not. But that's just me and why my decision isn't really the most ideal to go off of. Razz
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Post  Zwei Freeheart on Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:21 pm

Gate your so old style XD you can its like a brithmark

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Post  Temo on Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:28 pm

A birthmark that takes up both hands? No, I don't buy that. Sorry. XP
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Post  Zwei Freeheart on Sat Apr 10, 2010 11:52 pm

no i said its his right hand never said it was both

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Post  Dellinger on Sun Apr 11, 2010 12:03 am

*sighs* First off, it's not old style.
You have given us no details as to what this mark actually is.
All you have said it what it does.
That is the first issue.

The second issue:
You have not defended these powers or said why Zwei has them besides the mark.
We need more details than just the bare minimum.

Third:
Please redefine what you actually wrote as the powers.
I think I understand what you're trying to get at, but you lost me in the broken sentences.
As well, where are all of these things that he'll be 'fixing' coming from?
I don't believe some of these are actually in-game items, and if they are they are probably person-plot based
so just having powers that do this may mess up their plots.

Take some of those into consideration and please revise.
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Re: Zwei hand markings

Post  Zwei Freeheart on Sun Apr 11, 2010 9:12 am

i check on word theres notting wrong with it

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Post  Temo on Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:25 am

Spelling and grammar issues aside, don't forget about the rest of what Dell said, Zwei. These need a lot of editing and explaining before anybody can even think of saying yes.
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Post  Kenelm on Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:36 am

Is it just me, or is there actually a blend of Internet Shorthand and poorly written English? Neutral

I know Dellinger requested more details related to the following:

  • Background information related to the abilities
  • The reason for having the abilities


He also indirectly stated that what you have, more or less, appears to be notes.

Here's a tip: Think of this as a short informative essay (one page typed, at most; length deviation allowed).

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Post  Xeek on Sun May 16, 2010 8:52 am

I am sure he made another power thingy... Can one of them be trashed?
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Post  Zwei Freeheart on Sun May 16, 2010 9:26 am

that what i ask temo for

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Post  Xeek on Sun May 16, 2010 9:44 am

Still, having two is a waste of space Dx
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Post  Kenelm on Sun May 16, 2010 3:36 pm


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